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    Dear Manager of personnel department:

    I am writing this letter to apply for the job of administrative assistant in you company.I will graduate with bachelor degree major in International Economic & Trade this summer. I have worked as a customer service trainee in your company in the summer of 2002. When I saw your advertising on the newspaper, I thought your company would be the best choice for me to begin my career.
    My education has given me a lot of knowledge in the field of foreign international trade. As I work in your company before, my experience in your company would do much good to my future work. More addition, I get a high recommends from my senior manager during my work period. I have put my resume after my cover letter. I would be very appreciate that you could read it and reply me these days.

    Yours sincerely,
    CINDERELLA CHEN

    Resume

    CINDERELLA CHEN

    Room 201, No. 47, 3288Lane, Yanggao Road
    Shanghai, China 200125
    Phone: (021)50780704 Email: EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead


    OBJECTIVE

    A summer trainee for administrative assistant at Sunshine International Trade Company in Shanghai , China

    SUMMARY OF QUALIFICICATIONS
    l Interpersonal communication
    l Computer literate: Microsoft Office, Windows XP Professional, Microsoft Project
    l Native Chinese Speaker fluent in English: speaking, reading, writing
    l Certificate of State College English Test-Band 4 (CET-4), June 2003.

    EDUCATION

    Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce (SILC) Shanghai University Shanghai, China
    Post-Diploma of Shanghai University in International Economy and Trade. June 2005.
    Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce (SILC)Shanghai University Shanghai, China
    Diploma of Shanghai University in International Trade. Certificate IV of Insearch in English. June 2003.

    WORK EXPERIENCE

    Beijing Sunshine International Trade Company in Shanghai
    Customer Service Department Trainee
    Process and copy documents, send e-mail and answer telephones. Type the Customs declaration. Go with the staffs to the Customs. Summer, 2002
    Summer, 2004

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    Say:
    • Bachelor's degree

    Don't say:
    • foreign international trade

    Say, simply:
    • international trade


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    Tank you for your help, I will correct it.

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    Interpersonal communication

    Do you have a qualification in this?

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    Quote Originally Posted by tdol
    Interpersonal communication

    Do you have a qualification in this?
    I have been communicating interpersonally for years with varying degrees of success.

    :wink:

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    Have you got a certificate?
    I'd say 'good interpersonal skills'.

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    Quote Originally Posted by tdol
    Have you got a certificate?
    I'd say 'good interpersonal skills'.
    That works.


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