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    Help with sentences

    Can somebody please help me with the English?

    1-Doctors need to be better informed about the risks and benefits of drugs. However, X companiesí efforts in providing balanced information are debatable.

    2- Similar to that, it is noted from this review that negative aspect of a drug, which may discourage use of drug, is generally ignored in advertisements.

    3- Clear definition on balanced information appearing in X advertisement should be determined.Future policies and regulations on X advertising need to take account of this imbalance information.

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    Re: Help with sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by dean View Post
    Can somebody please help me with the English?

    1-Doctors need to be better informed about the risks and benefits of drugs. However, X companiesí efforts in providing balanced information are debatable.

    2- Similar to that, it is noted from this review that the negative effects of a drug, which may discourage use of that drug, is generally ignored in advertisements.

    3- Clear definition on balanced information appearing in X advertisement should be determined.Future policies and regulations on X advertising need to take account of this imbalance information.
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    Re: Help with sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by dean View Post
    Can somebody please help me with the English?

    1-Doctors need to be better informed about the risks and benefits of drugs. However, X companiesí efforts in providing balanced information are debatable.

    2- Similar to that, it is noted from this review that negative aspect of a drug, which may discourage use of drug, is generally ignored in advertisements.

    3- Clear definition on balanced information appearing in X advertisement should be determined.Future policies and regulations on X advertising need to take account of this imbalance information.
    Not a teacher.
    I would suggest following in the third sentence:
    3- A clear definition on balance of information appearing in X's advertising needs to be determined. Future policies and regulations on X's advertising needs to take into account this imablance of information.

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