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    please correct my resume and cover letter

    Kacy Yang
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    Dear sir.
    I am an Undergraduate from Shanghai University. I am interested in the position of the Foreign trade commissioner of your company.
    I am major in International Business and Trade. There are various kinds of courses, such as International Business, Marketing, English( speaking and writing), Organization Behavior. Besides these, I paid more attention to the course of Foreign Trade Practice because I have a clear objective to be engaged in the carrier. I have the CET-6, and I can use it skillfully, especially for the foreign trade term.
    Although I have no enough experience about the carrier, I have strong confidence to do the job. I have abundant knowledge about it learning form university, and I am so young to learn what I don not know.
    I think I am qualified to this position. Enclosed please find a copy of resume of mine. I think you will get more detailed information of mine.
    Thank you for reading and I am looking forwarder to your reply.


    here is my resume

    Objective:Seeking the position of the Foreign trade commissioner of foreign trade company.


    Summary of Qualifications:
    lNative Chinese speaker fluent in English: speaking, reading, writing
    lPass CET 6 Certificate
    lHave driving licensing
    lComputer literate: Skillfully operate the office automation

    Education:
    Shanghai University: Jading, Shanghai
    Post-Diploma of Shanghai University in International Economy and Trade of Sydney Institution of Language and Commerce (SLIC), June, 2003. GPA.3.3

    Additional course Xu Jia Hui, Shanghai
    Shanghai Jiao Tong University
    Intermediate Translation Course, September 2003


    Experience
    KFC Company
    Waitress. Communicate with customers, and dispense food. Summer 2000

    Clothing Company
    Secretary. Responded to clients’ inquiries in person and by telephone. Drafted and typed correspondence. Summer2002

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    It looks good to me, except what is office automation?


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    thanks for RonBee to correct my resume and cover letter

    Quote Originally Posted by RonBee
    It looks good to me, except what is office automation?


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    Besides these, I paid more attention to the course

    Thos doesn't sound very good- it sounds as if you weren't very interested in the other courses.

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