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    Hi all,

    Can somebody please comment on the English?
    Regards,
    Dean

    1-This raises the question whether they are appropriate indicators of the quality of information.

    2- In addition to that, this review highlights the need for studies that focus on common definitions and adapt similar methods.

    3-That effort will minimize the heterogeneity of data that had been facing by this review and allow direct comparison between studies.

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    1-This raises the question of whether they are appropriate indicators of the quality of information.

    2- In addition to that (this or that?), this review highlights the need for studies that focus on common definitions and adapt similar methods. (adapt or adopt?)

    3-That (This??) effort will minimize the heterogeneity of data that had been facing (What do you mean? This is very unclear to me) by this review and allow direct comparison between studies.

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    Hi Tdol,

    I would say :

    2- In addition to this, this review highlights the need for studies that focus on common definitions and adopt similar methods.

    3-This effort will minimize the heterogeneity of data that was found by this review. Futhermore, this will allow direct comparison between studies.

    Thanks,

    Dean

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