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    Default Synthesis: Crop Circles

    Hello!

    So here is another synthesis about Crop Circle. I tried to compare the competing arguments whether Crop Circles were created by humans or not.

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    "The author of the passage determines Crop Circles as created by humans and refuses thoughts of them as a resulting of alien work.
    Although a lot of data has been collected on this topic, the passage classifies them as not reliable, since people created complex circle structures in fields in a few hours. Therefore, there is no proof that any Crop Circle had not been built by humans.

    Contrary to this point, the lecture gives some evidences that humans couldn't have made all Crop Circles on their own.
    The recognized scientist Hawking for example, discovered new theorems of natural science in some special Crop Circle structures. Since nobody knew these theorems before, they must have been created by a more intelligent beeing.
    Some researchers suggest the circles to been caused by special sounds, which were shown to create extraordinary circle structures.
    Moreover, the appearance of some special circles cannot been explained. Whereas human created circles consist of broken crop, some structures in fields were built by bent plants, which are not damaged at all. Additional, the ground of these special crops exhibits unusual soil structures, emerging at temperatures at about 1500C."

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    The word "evidence" is not a count noun. There can't be two evidences or three evidences.

    Are you saying that the crop circles might have been made by aliens from outer space?


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    Default Re: Synthesis: Crop Circles

    Quote Originally Posted by SimonUnthan View Post
    Hello!

    So here is another synthesis about Crop Circle. I tried to compare the competing arguments whether Crop Circles were created by humans or not.

    Thank you for your proofreading!

    "The author of the passage determines Crop Circles as created by humans and refuses thoughts of them as a resulting of alien work.
    Although a lot of data has been collected on this topic, the passage classifies them as not reliable, since people created complex circle structures in fields in a few hours. Therefore, there is no proof that any Crop Circle had not been built by humans.

    Contrary to this point, the lecture gives some evidences that humans couldn't have made all Crop Circles on their own.
    The recognized scientist Hawking for example, discovered new theorems of natural science in some special Crop Circle structures. Since nobody knew these theorems before, they must have been created by a more intelligent beeing.
    Some researchers suggest the circles to been caused by special sounds, which were shown to create extraordinary circle structures.
    Moreover, the appearance of some special circles cannot been explained. Whereas human created circles consist of broken crop, some structures in fields were built by bent plants, which are not damaged at all. Additional, the ground of these special crops exhibits unusual soil structures, emerging at temperatures at about 1500C."
    The author of the passage determines that crop circles are created by humans and refuses any thought of them as a resulting from alien work.
    Although a lot of data has been collected on this topic, the passage classifies them as unreliable, since people have created complex circle structures in fields in a few hours. Therefore, there is no proof that any crop circle has not been built by humans.

    Contrary to this point, the lecture gives some evidence that humans could not have made all of these crop circles on their own.
    The recognized scientist Stephen Hawking*, for example, has discovered new theorems of natural science in some special crop circle structures. Since nobody knew these theorems before, they must have been created by a more intelligent being.
    Some researchers suggest that the circles have been caused by special sounds, which have been shown to create extraordinary circle structures.
    Moreover, the appearance of some special circles cannot been explained. Whereas human created circles consist of broken crops, some structures in the fields were formed by bent plants, which were not damaged at all. Additional, the ground of these special crops exhibits unusual soil structures which only emerge at temperatures at about 1500C."

    *If it wasnt Stephen Hawking, this is misleading. If it was, you should put his name.

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