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    Please correct my Reply letter (Urgent)

    hiiii

    When I sent Job application I got reply from the person concerned
    asking certain questions, which can get me an interview.
    These are the questions.
    A)Who had refereed you our organization name
    B)Where do you currently live (place of stay)
    C)Which area of work are you looking for e.g. Sales and or Software development / implementation(may require to travel within & outside UAE).
    D)Where is your husband working & since how long do you both live in the UAE
    E)What is your expected salary

    I drafted this reply which has to be sent at the earliest.Could someone please correct this.

    Dear MR X

    I would like to thank you for your time and consideration. I heard about your organization from the directory of DAFZA and became interested in your organization. I live near buhairah cornish. I am interested in both sales and software development, but my first preference is for software development. It is almost 2 years since I am in UAE. My husband, who is here for 6 years, is working in X company. Would you consider a salary of DHS 3500?.

    I am available for interview at your convenience.

    Thanking you in anticipitation.

    Yours faithfully
    Muktha Naive.
    Last edited by muktha; 20-Aug-2008 at 14:54.


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    Re: Please correct my Reply letter (Urgent)

    Dear Mr X

    Many thanks for your time and consideration. In response to your questions:

    I became interested in your organization when I read about it in the DAFZA directory.
    I live near Buhairah Cornish.
    I am interested in both sales and software development, but my first preference is for software development. I am both willing and able to travel in the UAE and abroad.
    I have been in the UAE for almost 2 years.
    My husband, who has been here for 6 years, works for X company.
    I am looking for a salary in the region of DHS 3500?.

    I am available for interview at your convenience.

    I look forward to your reply.

    Yours sincerely (You only use faithfully if you address the person to whom you are writing as Sir or Madam, not when you know their name)

    Muktha Naive.

    Good luck.

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    Re: Please correct my Reply letter (Urgent)

    Thank you very much schwa369

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