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    Felix
    Room 225, Dormitory 7, NO. 22 ChengZhong Street, JiaDing District
    Shanghai, China, 200439
    October 16, 2004

    Hr manager
    nikko
    15/F., Block A, Kerry BCI Godown I, 3 Kin Chuen Street,
    Kwai Chung, Hong Kong

    Dear Hr manager,
    I am a student from Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce of shanghai university. Iíve learned your company is a well-known sports products manufacturer providing excellent sports equipment. Nikkoís products are high qualitied and with fashion too, and that is the reason I like your product.
    My major is international trade and marketing, and I desire to be a number of your company to contribute to your sales with my knowledge and ability on the marketing and trade area. I think I will be helpful for marketing position. I have taken marketing course, and I have done a business report with my classmates about promoting the SVA TV to the NewYork market. As you can see, I have some marketing experiences, which will be useful for my marketing assistant position.
    I will be available for full-time employment after I am graduated at June 2005.
    Ií m looking forward to receive your reply, and thanks for your consideration.



    Sincerely yours,
    Felix



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    Felix
    Room 225, Dormitory 7, NO. 22 ChengZhong Street, JiaDing District
    Shanghai, China, 200439

    OBJECTIVE
    A marketing assistant position

    EDUCATION
    Bachelor of Global Business
    Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce, Shanghai university

    RELEVANT COURSE

    Global Marketing
    Global Finance
    Financial Accounting
    Microeconomics / Macroeconomics
    Financial Accounting
    Financial Management
    Business Report Writing
    International Business
    International Law
    Commercial Law
    International Commercial Law
    The Economics of Money, Banking and Financial Markets

    WORK EXPERIENCE
    International Business Assistant
    China shanghai (group) corporation for foreign economic & technological cooperation
    June 2004 Ė August 2004

    COMPUTER SKILLS
    Skilled at Microsoft Office

    LANGUAGE ABILITY
    Fluent in English, CET-6

    SELF- ASSESSMENT
    Independent, Honesty, keeping a harmonious and friendly relationship with classmates, carefulness, confidence, tenacity (not to give up)

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    Dear Hr manager,

    I'd say 'Dear Sir or Madam,'.

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    Quote Originally Posted by tdol
    Dear Hr manager,

    I'd say 'Dear Sir or Madam,'.
    yeah, looks better
    thanks

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    shanghai university. Iíve

    Capital letter for names and don't use contractions in formal writing.

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    Quote Originally Posted by felix123
    I am a student from Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce of shanghai university. Iíve learned your company is a well-known sports products manufacturer providing excellent sports equipment. Nikkoís products are high qualitied and with fashion too, and that is the reason I like your product.
    My major is international trade and marketing, and I desire to be a number of your company to contribute to your sales with my knowledge and ability on the marketing and trade area. I think I will be helpful for marketing position. I have taken marketing course, and I have done a business report with my classmates about promoting the SVA TV to the NewYork market. As you can see, I have some marketing experiences, which will be useful for my marketing assistant position.
    I will be available for full-time employment after I am graduated at June 2005.
    Ií m looking forward to receive your reply, and thanks for your consideration.

    My try:

    1. Capitalalize Shanghai University
    2. At June 2005 should be in June 2005.
    3. Looking foward to receiving your reply.
    4. Nikko's products are high qualitied and with fashion too. (Nikko's products are of high quality and fashionable. Quality is a noun.)
    5. Ability on the marketing and trade area. (in marketing and trade area.)
    6. I think I will be helpful. (I am confident I will be helpful.)
    7. Taken marketing courses.
    8. I like your products.
    9. I desire to be a number of your company. (I would like to be considered for a sales position... a number of is a typo.)

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    the people in this forum is helpful!
    thanks to all the guys :grin:

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    what o you meen , i don't understand .

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    padmaratna Guest

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    what do you meen , i don't understand .

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    marketing experiences

    This should be 'marketing experience'

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