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    rickie_red Guest

    pls do me a favor of my resume and cover letter, thx

    Resume
    Rickie Yun
    Room 202,No.2, Branch Lane 40,Lane 502, JiangSu Road
    13817639446
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    COLLEGE EDUCATION
    Bachelor of Arts in Economics
    University of Shanghai, China June, 2005
    Diploma of International Trade June, 2003
    University of Technology Sydney, Australia

    WORKING EXPERIENCES
    Mary Key Cosmetics, Shanghai June-August, 2002
    (Customer Service Dept, Headquarters)
    Customer service Dept.:—Cataloguing the orders from sales points all over the country charted the numeral.—Dealing patiently with the complaints and answering some questions related with the products.

    ACTIVITIES AND HONORS
    Shanghai University Scholarship, First Prize September, 2004
    Participating with 6thChina, Shanghai International Arts
    Festival as a volunteer June-October, 2004
    Shanghai University Scholarship, Second Prize October, 2003
    Scholarship of Shanghai University excellent single project October, 2002

    PERSONAL SKILLS
    Language skills: Excellent in English (speaking and writing) CET-6, Middle level of interpretation (first phrase).
    Knowledge of Japanese.


    Dear Sir/ Madam,
    I would like to apply for the position of Human Resource Mangement,advertised in the jobmarket newspaper.
    Personally, I am very interested in the position of Human Resource Mangement. I found the responsibilites mentioned in your requirments which emphasize the custoomer orientation job tasks. while I feel confidently qualified for the position. I do have similar working experiences on the job responsibility. Once I had internship experience in Marykay, where I did partly human resouce job for the company . Also, I worked in the customer sevice deptment in MaryKay and other internship jobs. Therefore, the position with your company would give me the opportunity to be exposed to the business community and to exert my influence on your company’s growth.
    I am looking forward to hearing from you, and I am would be happy to attend interview at any time convenient to you.

    Yours sincerely,
    Rickie Yun

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    WORKING EXPERIENCES

    I'd say Work Experience


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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    COLLEGE EDUCATION

    I'd use 'University' rather than 'College'.

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