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I read the following sentence #1 in a report. The phrase ‘more than a 10% share’ doesn’t sound okay to me. Can I replace this sentence with sentence #2? Please suggest if you know any other way of writing the sentence.
1. Only California and Florida have more than a 10% share of the company’s portfolio.
2. Only California and Florida have a more than 10% share of the company’s portfolio.