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    LUKA CHEN
    Tel: (021) 5*****3, cell: 138******39
    Room *** No.*** Lane **, Zhongtan Road. Shanghai, 200*** China
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    Shanghai xinxin sports development Co. Ltd
    Add: F23, CenturyBa-shiMansion, 398HuaihaiZhongRoad,shanghai200020, China
    Tel: (86-21) 63840934
    Fax: (86-21) 63860871
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    October 16, 2004

    Respected Madam or Sir:

    Re: Application for secretary of chief match inspector

    I will graduate from the Shanghai University, Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce with a 3 years degree in June of next year. My major is international trade and I am very interested in securing a position before I graduate, if possible.

    I have long been hopeful of working for you after I graduate, because I consider you are the one of the finest company in Shanghai. I am sure that if I have the privilege of being an employee in your company, I will greatly increase my education and my experience while trying my best to do in the work team. Because I know that Xinxin Sports have undertaken Shanghai ATP, three WTA, F1 motor boat and so on, and will be the role of popularizing all matches to receive more world’s challenges. If you can give me the opportunity, then the company’s future means my future, I will truly work hard to be qualified the job. If not, please keep my name on your file, because I consider Xinxin sports has been the first choice in my mind.

    I will be available during the weekdays in the morning for any interviews you may want to give, and hoping for your immediate reply.
    Sincerely yours,

    LUKA CHEN

    My Resume

    Luka Chen
    School Shanghai University, Sydney Institute of Language and
    Commerce.
    Curriculum vitae Technological academy
    Major International trade
    Tel (021) 52****13 cell: 138******39
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    Postal Code 200***
    Address Room*** No.***Lane**, Zhongtan Road, Shanghai

    objective:
    To obtain a challenging position in an experienced and innovative team
    Education:
    Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce (SILC), Shanghai University, Shanghai, China 2002-Present
    BS in International Business
    Got Scholarship in 2002-2003 semester.

    Computer Abilitees
    Skilled in use of Win 2000/NT, Office 2000,and computer hardware.

    English Skills
    Have a good command of both spoken and written English

    Demonstrate CET-4

    Workexperience ·OCTOBER-NOVERBER, 2003, Research company to do part-time job for some research·
    JUNE-AUGEST, 2004 In Shanghai Pudun technology development Co. Ltd. do business relating to financial, healthcare

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Respected Madam/Sir:


    I'd say

    Dear Sir or Madam,

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    objective:
    To obtain a challenging position in an experienced team to make innovation team work

    Objective- should be capitalised

    You repeat 'team' in the sentence- why not try rephrasing it?

    To obtain a challenging position in an experienced and innovative team.

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    Thank you for giving advises. Your suggestions have helped me a lot.

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