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    Default Alicia's cover letter and resume

    resume:
    Alicia MA

    Room***, No.**, Xie Tu Road, Shanghai, China
    139182*****, 6305****
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    Objective
    Professional or technical position in an International Company

    Expertise/Summary of Qualifications
    lGood interpersonal communication skills
    lNative Chinese Speaker, Fluent English
    lMS office ,MS PPT, MS Windows, internet skills
    lMember of group in doing business report at university
    lGood at affairs requiring patience, brainstorming and creative ability

    Education
    Sydney Institute of Language & Commerce (SILC) Shanghai, China
    Shanghai University
    Post-Diploma of international trade and economy. From 2001 to present

    LiXin Accounting College Shanghai, China
    Majored in Accounting and international trade. Form 2000 to 2001

    Scholarships
    Scholarship in senior XiNan Model School (middle school),
    “Good Students Scholarship” in Shanghai Foreign Language School (Junior school)
    Relevant course
    ERP (Enterprise of resource plan) certificate 2004
    Intermediate Oral interpretation, 2000-2001
    IELTS Course, 2003
    Experience

    Shanghai General Motor Company (SGM) Shanghai, China
    Buyer of purchasing department, From June 2004 to Sep 2004

    Shanghai PY Software Guard Company Shanghai, China
    Working in Propagate and plan department, Form June 2003 to Sep 2003

    Shanghai Smert Service Center(SSSC) Shanghai, China
    Secretary. Reorganization of information, collection of information, Form June 2002 to Sep. 2002

    Financial company of Shanghai Auto Industry Company (SAIC) Shanghai, China
    Credit and loan affairs, assist the accountant, computer processing. Communicated well with colleagues. Form June 2001 to Sep.2001


    Cover letter

    Dear Sir or Madam:,
    I am a student in Shanghai University; I will be graduate in the middle of 2005.

    I saw the recruitment advertisement of your company from the newspaper last week. I want to get the buyer position that was mentioned in the newspaper.

    As I know, the main business of your company is producing automobile. It is famous for your perfect products and long history. The experience of working in your company will become ones wealth in the life. What are learned in the company are not only the special knowledge but also plentiful experience. Therefore, working in your company is always a strong wish in my life.

    I will graduate next year, so it welcomes my first job in my life. I will put all my enthusiasm into the job because I know what it is means to me. I must be loyal to the first company which help me grow up. I major in international trade and economy in university that was the same to what you acquire in you advisement. Besides this, I’ve ever practice in some international company. From the resume you can see I’ve worked in SGM as a buyer and get praise for my boss. Although I am a university student, I have many experience of society. I have skills of communicate with people, talk in English fluently, computer control and others. I think I will be the suitable person that your company is looking for.

    If your company employed me, I definitely working hard for company, devote all the energy to my job. You will rejoice it is a correct choice to choose me!

    Best wishes,



    Alicia Ma
    2004-10-17

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    lGood interpersonal communication skills
    | here looks strange.

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    I mean "I have good relationship with people, I can communicate with others friendly in a good way"
    do you understand me?If there is any mistake,please correct it for me.Thanks for your help!!!!!

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    Shanghai General Motor Company (SGM) Shanghai, China
    Buyer of purchasing department, From June 2004 to Sep 2004

    I'd use 'Buyer for Purchasing Department', as you probably weren't the only one in such a large company.

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