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    Dear Sir or Madam:
    My name is Wang Ying, and my English name is Fiona. Having noticed the career advertisement on the internet of your company, my interest in Management Trainee Programme, which can lead to the role of Operations Manager of HSBC, has prompted me to forward my resume for your review a consideration.
    Please note that I am currently completing my senior year at Shanghai University, Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce and will receive my Bachelor Degree with a major in international economics and trade in June 2005.Throughout school, and during part-time employment, I have continued to strengthen my focus in these areas. In addition, I participated in Asia-Pacific the first Inter-Varsity Chinese Debates Tournament in Singapore as the delegate of Shanghai University. I have excellent problem-solving skills and feel that, if given the opportunity, I would be an immediate as well as a long-term asset to your firm.
    The enclosed resume describes my qualifications for the position advertised. I would welcome the opportunity to personally discuss my qualifications with you at your convenience. Thank you for your time and consideration.

    THIS IS MY RESUME
    Wang Ying
    Room 502, NO.188, Qilianshan Road,
    Baoshan, Shanghai, China, 200436
    Phone: 13817797536
    Email: EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead

    SUMMARY OF QUALIFICATIONS
    Native Chinese Speaker fluent in English: speaking, reading, writing.Have passed CET-6 and Intermediate Interpretation (written part)
    Proficient in Microsoft Office, Visual-Basic and HTML design. Passed National Computer Rank Examination Grade 2
    Won “the excellent debater” honorary title in several debate matches, participated in Asia-Pacific the first Inter-Varsity Chinese Debates Tournament in Singapore as the delegate of Shanghai University.
    Key leadership role in the University Student Union
    Good at Planning and Organization
    Excellent in Interpersonal Communication skills
    RELEVANT COURSE WORK
     Objective Behavior Organization and Motivation skills
     Business Communication Communicating skills
     International Trade Doing business in different countries
     Accounting Financial and Accounting knowledge
     Commerce English Spoken English in Business
    EDUCATION
    Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce (SILC) Shanghai University Shanghai, China
    Diploma of Shanghai University July, 2003
    Bachelor Degree in International Economics and Trade Expected July, 2005
    Received Academic Scholarship July, 2002
    WORK EXPERIENCE
    Wandi International Trade Company Shanghai, China
    Manager Assistant.
    Aided in planning future business, organizing conferences and contacting clients
    June to September, 2003.
    Tutor
    Taught a junior high school student English, Maths and Physics from March to August, 2001
    Taught a senior high school student English from May to July, 2002

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    My name is Wang Ying, and my English name is Fiona.

    I wouldn't include this here- your name will appear at the bottom of the letter.

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