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    Dear Miss Zhang,
    First, I'm glad that you see my e-mail.First, let me introduce myself. I'm a student from shanghai university and my major subject is international business. I wish I can go to Sony after I graduate from the university. As the manager of human resource department, you gave your idea that Sony need what kind of people to a journalist of Renming newspapers. I saw the news. I think I am good choice for you. You said that If the people is willing to learn and learn well in a short time,Sony could accept the student just graduate from the university. I'm this kind of people I'm sure. I wish you can give me a opportunity to make and interview with me. Thanks a lot .
    Yours sincerely,
    Frank
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