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    COVER LETTER
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    Date: October 17,2004
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    Dear Sir:
    Are you searching for a marketing plan that can use English and computer well and have great enthusiasm in the job?
    Your advertisement for a marketing plan in website interested me because the position that you described sounds exactly like the kind of job I am seeking.
    According to the advertisement, your position requires the person who has the knowledge about globe marketing and the ability for despoliation. I feel that I am competent to meet the requirements. I will be graduating from Shanghai University. My studies have included courses in International Business, International Management, International Business Law, International Finance, Basic Marketing, Globe Marketing, Practical Import-Export Trade, Accounting and so on.
    I major in International Business in University. English studies my profession. Our Most of our teachers use English to teach us lessons, which improves my English at my university. During my education, I have grasped the principals of my major and skills of practice. I can communicate with others freely in English. My ability to write and speak English is out of question.
    I would appreciate your time in reviewing my enclosed resume and if there is any additional information you require, please contact me. I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.

    Sincerely,
    Zhao Youjia (Sally)

    Resume
    Name: Zhao youjia Sex: Female
    Date of birth: September 28,1983 Age: 22
    Education level: graduate Email: EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead
    Mobil phone 13816994157 Tel: (021) 66217768
    Objective
    To obtain a challenging position as an employee of marketing with an emphasis in market research and development.
    Education
    2002.7-2005.6 Major in International Business, Graduate School of Shanghai University
    Academic Main Courses
    Microeconomics Macroeconomics
    International Business International Business Law
    International Management Human Resource Management
    Accounting International Finance
    Basic Marketing Globe Marketing
    Practical Import-Export Trade Management Information System
    Computer Abilities
    Skilled in use of Win 95/98/2000/XP, HTML, Office 97/2000/XP, SQL software, FoxPro, Access
    English Skills
    Have a good command of both spoken and written English.
    Activities and Interests
    Hobbies include reading, music, painting, sports, politics, economics, and traveling.
    Work Experience
    June 2004-August 2004. Employee of Shenyin & Wanguo Securities Co., Ltd
    May 2004-June 2004. Marketing researcher in Research International China Ltd
    March 2004-July 2004. Part-time job for selling tickets in Yinqixing Skiing Company
    March 2004. Part-time job for selling shampoos in Sibao Co., Ltd
    Qualifications
    General business knowledge relating to financial, marketing, healthcare
    Have a passion for the Internet, and an abundance of common sense
    Self-motivated; able to organize, analyze and meet operational deadlines.
    Respond well in high-pressure atmosphere.
    Capable of handing a diversity of responsibilities simultaneously.

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Your first sentence is a bit confusing- surely they are looking for someone if they are advertising the position, so I'd get rid of the whole sentence. Also, a 'a maketing plan' is the thing, not the person who makes the plans- they're planners.

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    My ability to write and speak English is out of question
    This is a bit too much IMO. They can question whatever they want, and it's part of the recruitment actually. Just say your English is very good, and let them be the judge during an interview.

    FRC

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    I think Sally means 'beyond doubt\question'. However, I wouldn't use it because, as you say, they can question or doubt anything they like.

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