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    Title for my article

    Pls. is it written correctly??

    Optimization of planning in manufactoring concern


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    Re: Title for my article

    Quote Originally Posted by popsie View Post
    Pls. is it written correctly??

    Optimization of planning in manufacturing concern
    Are you using "concern" in the sense of "business"? If so you need the plural - concerns - but "businesses" would be a better word.

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