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    COVER LETTER
    Room 504 No.3 Cheng Nan Rd,
    Pudong New Area, Shanghai, 201200 P. R. China
    Post Code: 201200
    Tel: (021)-58925477
    Mobile phone: 13122038668
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    Jin Shi Business and trade Co, limited
    Room 1903 No 521 South Wanping Rd, P. R. China,200000
    021-64644471
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    Dear Mr. Huang:
    I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a Marketing Manager in your Shanghai Offices, which published on the website (http://www.01job.cn/asp/qiyedetal.asp?qiye=judy). Enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous work experience and qualifications.
    I am a fresh man that will graduate from Shanghai University, who is majored in International Trade, in June 2005. My personality is well suited to working as a marketing manager. I am an ambitious, creative, hardworking, and flexible person, although I am a new fresh man, I can fit the environment and grasp all the relative knowledge from daily work quickly. This position must be a challenge that could give me chance to apply my expertise and realize my personal value. I know, your company is one of the largest drink companies in the world. It represented in more than 38 countries, so I am keen on joining your company and becoming one member of the creative team sincerely.

    RESUME

    Ann Lin
    Room 504 No.3 Cheng Nan Rd,
    Pudong New Area, Shanghai, 201200 P. R. China
    Post Code: 201200
    Tel: (021)-58925477
    Mobile phone: 13122038668
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    Objective
    Seeking position of Marketing Manager of Jin Shi Business and trade Co, limited

    Summary of Qualification
    Good knowledge of interpersonal communication
    Computer literate: Microsoft Office, FoxPro, and C++
    Native Chinese speaker with satisfactory English speaking, listening, writing and reading skills
    Got the Certificate for State College English Test (CET)- Band 4 in September 2003

    Education
    Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce (SILC) Shanghai University Shanghai, China
    Diploma of International Trade, June 2002

    Experience
    Work as a seller for Shanghai Pispi digital and science company limited in Augest,2004
    Work as a seller for Shanghai Sikainong cosmetic makeup toiletry company in May,2004

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    OK- let's have a look at this.
    which published on the website- there are two ways you could do this:

    which was published on your website
    published on your website

    If you use the realtive pronoun 'which', you must include 'was'.

    2 I am a fresh man that will graduate from Shanghai University

    freshman- one word
    as this is formal, I'd way 'who will graduate'

    Or, simple 'I will graduate from Shanghai University in XXXX

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