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    Cover Letter
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    Date: 2004/10/17
    Person/Company: Miss shi / Anlian Dazhong Insurance Co., Ltd
    Address: EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead , http://www.allianzdazhong.com.cn
    Re: Possible Employment

    Dear Miss shi:
    The sale manager position advertised in the Internet intrigues me. I think that I m a suitable person to qualify this job.
    I major in international trade in Shanghai University. Most of our teachers teach lessons by using English. So I think my English ability is not a problem if the job requirement needs it. Computer is also the important lesson that I must master. Now, I can skilled in use Office software, SQL software and so on. Meanwhile, I also learn many specialized subject such as International Finance, International Trade, Marketing and so on.
    I think I can capable of working independently or as a member of a team and feel confident of my ability to provide quality performance in any assignment that I undertake. I also can have the good relationship with my partners.
    Thank you for your attention to this matter. I hope that you can give me the opportunity to show my ability to direct your organization towards successfully achieving goals.

    Sincerely yours,
    Judith


    Resume
    Basic information:
    Chinese name: Zhu hong
    English name: Judith
    Sex: Female
    Date of birth: May 29, 1983
    Telephone: 021-58396409
    Mobile: 13386171992

    Objective:
    A position that will further develop my superior marketing skills.

    Education:
    2002.92005.7 International Trade SILC Shanghai University

    Academic Main Courses:
    College English, Business English, Micro Economics, Macro Economics, Basic Marketing, Global Marketing, International Finance, Organization Behavior, International Management, International Business law, Financial Institutions and Marketing, Business Communication, Accounting, International trade basic knowledge, etc.

    English Abilities:
    Have a good command of both spoken and written English.

    Computer Skills:
    Skilled in use of Win 98/2000/XP, Office 98/2000, HTML, SQL software.

    Scholarships and Awards:
    2003.9 second-grade scholarships

    Experience:
    2004.7 Work in Yiyi Corporation
    Mainly in charge of the order of goods

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Dear Miss Shi,

    The sale manager position advertised in the Internet intrigues me.

    I don'tlike 'intrigues' here. 'Intrigue' doesn't suggest that you are committed to getting the job, just vaguely interested.

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    Don't use contractions in formal writing at all.

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