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    my cover letter and resume

    Dear Sir or Madam:

    Your advertisement for a Management Trainee on the Internet interested me because the position that you described is exactly like the kind of job I am seeking.

    My name is Carrie. I am a graduate of Sydney Language and Commerce Institute, Shanghai University. I major in International Economic and Trade. My relevant courses are international law, Marketing, International Trade, and Financial management. I know your company is a large multinational enterprise, and this job can give me plentiful experience. I will be honored to be a member of your company.

    Enclosed is a copy of my resume, in which is more fully details of my qualifications for the position.

    Thank you for reading. I look forward to receiving your return information.

    Sincerely yours,

    Carrie Zhou

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    Resume:

    Carrie Zhou
    Room 1006, No.3 Building,
    #1050 Zhangyang Road,
    Shanghai, China, 200122
    Phone: (021)68766321
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    Objective
    Seeking a position in a large multinational company.

    Summary of Qualifications
    Native Chinese Speaker with a high proficiency level in English: Speaking, Reading, Writing
    Interpersonal Communication Skills
    High Responsibility
    CET-6
    Computer Literate: Microsoft Windows, Microsoft Office, Foxpro, Internet Research, HTML design, ERP

    Education
    Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce (SILC) Jia Ding district, SH Shanghai University
    Post-Diploma in International Economics and Trade. Anticipated May, 2005

    Relevant Coursework
    ERP(Enterprise of Resource Plan) course, Present
    CET-6 course, 2003

    Experience
    Stectragem Company Shanghai, PD
    Assistant of accountant. Created financial statements. Summer 2002.

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    Re: my cover letter and resume

    Quote Originally Posted by carrie_zhou
    Dear Sir or Madam:

    Your advertisement for a Management Trainee on the Internet interested me because the position that you described is exactly like the kind of job I am seeking.

    My name is Carrie. I am a graduate of Sydney Language and Commerce Institute, Shanghai University. I major in International Economic and Trade. My relevant courses are international law, Marketing, International Trade, and Financial management. I know your company is a large multinational enterprise, and this job can give me plentiful experience. I will be honored to be a member of your company.

    Enclosed is a copy of my resume, in which is more fully details of my qualifications for the position.

    Thank you for reading. I look forward to receiving your return information.

    Sincerely yours,

    Carrie Zhou

    Enclosed


    Resume:

    Carrie Zhou
    Room 1006, No.3 Building,
    #1050 Zhangyang Road,
    Shanghai, China, 200122
    Phone: (021)68766321
    Email: EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead

    Objective
    Seeking a position in a large multinational company.

    Summary of Qualifications
    Native Chinese Speaker with a high proficiency level in English: Speaking, Reading, Writing
    Interpersonal Communication Skills
    High Responsibility
    CET-6
    Computer Literate: Microsoft Windows, Microsoft Office, Foxpro, Internet Research, HTML design, ERP

    Education
    Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce (SILC) Jia Ding district, SH Shanghai University
    Post-Diploma in International Economics and Trade. Anticipated May, 2005

    Relevant Coursework
    ERP(Enterprise of Resource Plan) course, Present
    CET-6 course, 2003

    Experience
    Stectragem Company Shanghai, PD
    Assistant of accountant. Created financial statements. Summer 2002.
    I think it's better to place "course work" under the category of "Education".

    Also, I think it's better to place "Experience" immediately after the "Summary of Qualifications".

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    Assistant of accountant. Created financial statements. Summer 2002. <<<<

    What else can you say about your experience at these places? I would include more information here.

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    exactly like the kind of job

    I don't like this phrase-I'd say 'exactly the job'.

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