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    This traffic fine was due to overload carriage
    This incident was occurred during the time of shifting of overshaped items from our warehouse to Project XY in December 2007

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    Default Re: Kindly correct the following sentences

    This traffic (shipping? road?) fine was due to a (weight? size?) overload during shipment.

    This incident occurred during the time of shifting (transport? shipping?) of overshaped items from our warehouse to Project XY in December 2007

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    Default Re: Kindly correct the following sentences

    This was a road traffic fine due to overload (size), incident was occurred during the time of transportation of items from our warehouse to Project XY, this incident occurred
    in December 2007

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    Default Re: Kindly correct the following sentences

    This was a road traffic fine due to an overload (size) situation which occurred during the transportation of items from our warehouse to Project XY. This incident happened in December 2007.

    Ok!!

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