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The Great Pyramid: one of the seven wonders of the world
Egypt is famous with for the Great or true OMIT Pyramid. it is built at Giza for Sneferu's son, Khufu , belonging to who lived in the 4th dynasty . InOn the ancient monument's walls, it is inscribed that Khufu was a kind [a kind what?] and also a god. His cult had approached lasted until the 24th dynasty. His full name is Khnum Khufwy which means " (the god) khufu protect me".
The Great Pyramid is considered to be the tallest, oldest and widest building in the of/in the ancient world. It took them omit 20 years to build the Great Pyramid. It is made of limestone which was gleaming gleamed in the sunlight.
The king followed by 100,000 workers offering them clothes and food. [What is this relating to?] It is assumed that ramps had been built in straight way or in spiral pattern, but in fact it is known how the ramps was laid out. the stone weighing 2.5 tons each. wetting the ground , a slick path has been created to dragg these blocks of stones by rope which sat on sledges. it is never shown in the walls that the stones were lift on rollers. This paragraph is messy. After the first sentence, state that you are going to describe how it was constructed. Then go on to describe how the stones were moved.
When the interior was explored, it was found that there was an "air shaft" in the main chamber connected to the great gallery. However, when they opened it, they didn't find Khufu's mummy nor any treasure. Some mentioned people believe that the Great Pyramid was not meant to be a tomb. It is a fascinating building.
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