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    Pls correct my piece of writing, TKS!


    Master Kong C.K, born in Hong Kong, family register (origined) in Guangdong XinNing, devoted himself to martial art, and learned both north and south wings of QuenSu in his young age.

    Kong awarded a qualification as a qualified coach approved by Hong Kong Ving Tsun Athletic Association. He established Ving Tsun Kong, C.K Martial Arts Institute in 1996.

    In 1999, Master Kong was invited to attend the First World Ving Tsun Conference, held by Hong Kong Ving Tsun Athletic Association.

    During the conference, Kong was invited to perform the ChiSou and received compliments from the audience.

    As a board member of Hong Kong Ving Tsun Athletic Association since 2000 to 2002, Master Kong dedicated to promoting Ving Tsun Martial Arts to all people from different classes, different countries.

    Later in May 2003, he successfully established the Ving Tsun Kong, C.K Martial Arts Institute (Headquarter) with the permanent address in XXX

    Master Kong C.K. represents the new era of Ving Tsun Kuen, he not only as a chairman of Ving Tsun Kong, C.K Martial Arts Institute, but also a representative in the following organizations.

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    Re: Pls correct my piece of writing, TKS!

    Quote Originally Posted by skymoon View Post
    Master Kong C.K, born in Hong Kong, family register (origined) registered in Guangdong XinNing, devoted himself to martial arts, and learned both north and south wings of QuenSu in his young age. at an early age

    Kong was awarded a qualification as a qualified omit coach approved by the Hong Kong Ving Tsun Athletic Association. He established Ving Tsun Kong, C.K Martial Arts Institute in 1996.

    In 1999, Master Kong was invited to attend the First World Ving Tsun Conference, held by the Hong Kong Ving Tsun Athletic Association.

    During the conference, Kong was invited to perform the ChiSou and received compliments from the audience.

    As a board member of the Hong Kong Ving Tsun Athletic Association since between 2000 and 2002, Master Kong was/became dedicated to promoting Ving Tsun Martial Arts to all omit people from different classes and different countries.

    Later, in May 2003, he successfully established the Ving Tsun Kong, C.K Martial Arts Institute (Headquarters) with the a permanent address in XXX

    Master Kong C.K. represents the new era of Ving Tsun Kuen. He not only as a is Chairman of Ving Tsun Kong, C.K Martial Arts Institute, but also a representative in the following organizations:
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