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    To Epson HR manager:
    Dear Sir or Madam:
    The accompanying resume is in response to the job that you may give me.
    I have visited your web site, and I’m very interested in your company. I would like to apply for any position in your company.
    I am a student of Shanghai University now, and I will graduate with a Bachelor of economic degree from Shanghai University in Shanghai, China next year. I took holiday jobs during almost all my summer holidays. I had been a waitress at McDonald’s, a management assistant at MeiLiHua Ltd.co., and an sales assistant at Shanghai Tuohe import & export Ltd.co..
    I hope to become a member of yours because the working condition and surrounding are excellent, all conductive to the further development of my abilities. I think my qualifications and experience perfectly match what you are looking for.  It would be so appreciate if I can get your reply as soon as possible ,if you still need any other documents and have any problems , please no hesitate to contact me.

    Look forward to hearing from you.

    Sincerely of Yours,
    Daly Chen
    (signature)
    2004/10/17











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    Daly Chen

    Personal Information
    1906/3/342 Yinshan St., Shanghai China
    E-mail address: EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead
    Mobile phone: 13386245862
    Home number: 021-50718092

    Education
    2000/09-2003/07 Major in International Trade and Out standing English
    Diploma degree
    Sydney Institutes of Language and Commerce
    Shanghai University. P.R. China
    2003/09-now Major in International Economic and Trade and Out standing English
    Bachelor degree
    Sydney Institutes of Language and Commerce
    Shanghai University. P.R. China
    2003/09-now Major in finance
    Bachelor degree
    Net Education Commerce
    Shanghai Jiaotong University. P.R. China

    Honors
    Win 2000-2001 “first class scholarship” of Shanghai University
    Win 2003-2004 “second class scholarship” of Shanghai University
    ”Great dormitory”, pass Cet4 and Cet6
    Other trainings
    2000-2001 Computer course (Dream weaver, Windows, Visual basic, Office 2000)
    Business English (self study)
    Typing course (280-310k/m)
    2001-2002 Basic French (study in Shanghai foreign language university)
    2001-now Japanese
    2003 Accounting
    Employment
    2002/06-2002/08 Management Assistant of Mei Li Hua Ltd.Co.
    2003/07-2003/08 Waitress Of McDonald’s
    2004/08 Sales Assistant Of TUOHE Import & Export
    Ltd.Co.

    Other skills
    Fluent in Mandarin, Oral English, and business English
    Fast learning.
    Hard working
    French and Japanese
    High suitable ability to new environment
    Good teamwork

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    Other skills
    Fluent in Mandarin, Oral English, and business English

    If you are a native speaker of Mandarin, I suggest leaving out the "fluent in Mandarin."


    It seems like a dancer is applying for a dance teacher.

    Other skill
    1.Dance
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    3. :D

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    French and Japanese are listed away from English and no indication of level is given.

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    Very thoughtful!

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    Quote Originally Posted by blacknomi
    Very thoughtful!
    Please check your spelling especially caps. Avoid words such as would/should. Oral English?

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    Huh?
    Okay, I'll try to tell the poster, daly_juliet. :D

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