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    Name:Cash Zhang
    Student code: 02320570
    Room 218, No 7, 20 ChengZhong Road
    Shanghai P.R. China
    Postcode: 201800
    Telephone: 69981039
    Mobile: 13774236677
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    Date: 16/10/2004
    Job I want: Assistant Marketing Manager (Marketing Group)
    Company information: Shanghai Volkswagen Automotive Co. Ltd
    Address: Luo Pu Road Anting Shanghai 201805 China
    Post code: 201805
    Telephone: (021)59577275
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    Dear Sir:
    Thanks for reading my self-recommend letter from your busying hour first. My name is Cash.According to the advertisement ,your position requires in marketing department in Shanghai volkswagen company. I feel that I am competent to meet the requirements. I will be graduating from silc business collage of Shanghai university this year with a international trade degree. My studies have included courses in international trade, marketing, international business and other management ability like H&R business communication in business.
    During my education, I have grasped the principals of my major and skills of practice. Not only have I passed CET-4, but more important I am processing CET-6 and can communicate with others freely in English. My ability to write and speak English is out of question. I also have half years of marketing experience, during this summer holiday I work in a auto glass company in marketing department. I am confident that my combination of practical work experience and solid educational experience has prepared me for making an immediate contribution to your company. I understand the level of professionalism and communication required for long-term success in the marketing field.
    I would appreciate your time in reviewing my enclosed resume and if there is any additional information you require, please contact me.I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.

    Resume
    Room 218, No 7, 20 ChengZhong Road
    Shanghai P.R. China
    Postcode: 201800
    Telephone: 69981039
    Career Objective
    To obtain a challenging position as a assistant marketing manager with an emphasis in marketing design and research.
    Education
    2002.9-2005.6 Dept.of international business Graduate School of Shanghai University
    Academic Main Courses
    Mathematics
    Advanced Mathematics Probability and Statistics Linear Algebra
    Marketing
    Global Marketing 3/e
    Accounting
    Microeconomics
    Macroeconomics
    Organizational behavior
    International business
    Abilitees
    Skilled in business management and business communication and marketing planning.
    English Skills
    Have a good command of both spoken and written English .Past CET-4
    Qualifications
    General business knowledge relating to financial, healthcare
    Have a passion for the Internet, and an abundance of common sense

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    See my comment here about your first sentence:
    http://www.usingenglish.com/forum/vi...?p=44667#44667

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    Quote Originally Posted by tdol
    See my comment here about your first sentence:
    http://www.usingenglish.com/forum/vi...?p=44667#44667

    Mr Richard
    Thank you for your help in my resumes. I'v changed in my letter. :D

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    OK, Cash, now 'My name is Cash'. Is there any need for you name in the letter? I can get your name from the bottom of the letter.

    PS- It's Richard, not Mister Richard- don't use titles with first names.

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    HA...
    Than I have knew.
    Because I am a Chinese student so sometimes...maybe..."Chinglish"
    Thank u Richard

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    Hi, Richard! :D :D

    Welcome back, $$Cash$$

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