Hi next week i'm taking exam. Please could you correct me this letter.
Ascoli Piceno 63038
5th September 2008
33 St. Michel Street
In with reference to the letter published in August issue of The Bognor Post, I would like to express my point of view.
First of all, I absolutely agree with the opinion of Elaine Pichard because I spent my holiday in Bognor Regis and like her I would like to show my disgust for the appalling week while staying there.
I was in this tourist resort about a weak and I can affirm that it is not that wonderful place advertised in every tourist magazines.
To be honest ,I decided to go to this town because I read a fantastic article about Bognor but my holiday was not good as I hoped.
In start with, the restaurant , where I was to have dinner, was unwelcoming, and need to be repairs ; the personnel was impolite and rude, the service was slow and although it is famous for its fresh desserts I found the cake bad and tasteless.
To make matters worse, the prizes were unreasonably high respect to the service which I received.
The hotel I stayed in boasted of being the best in town was dirty and need of redecoration too.
Two days later I went to the seaside of the town and I was astonished seeing that the coast and beach was in poor condition.
In conclusion I would like to give suggestion to authority of Bognor Regis.
You should resolve many trouble you have because your town would be a fantastic place where people could relax.
I hope you will publish my letter.
Thank you very much.