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    resume and cover letter by Jimmy

    Jimmy

    October 19,2004
    Room 222 Building 7, 20 Chengzhong Road
    Shanghai University
    Shanghai, China 201800
    Tel: 86-21-69981035
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    Marketing Manager
    Haier
    1 Haier Road
    Qingdao, China 266103
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    Dear Miss Liu:
    I was glad to know that your company willing to find a maketing manager on your company's website. I feel that the job is the one I'm looking for for a long time, I'm very interested in it.

    My name is Chen Wei, an open-minded boy of 21 years old stuedying in the Shanghai University. I will complete my International Trad subject with all the confidence, knowledge and capability next year. I have learn lots of Marketing knowladge. My subject is teaching by foreign teachers, so my English improved deeply during my studying. I think I can slove the English problem or talk to foreign business people in no difficulty.

    Thank you for your consideration. I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.

    Yours sincerely,
    Jimmy Chen



    Resume


    Personal information

    English name: Jimmy
    Chinese name: Chen wei
    Date of birth: June 21, 1984
    Place of birth: Shanghai Telephone: (021)66371322
    Marital Status: unmarried
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    Academic Main Courses:
    International Business, Marketing, International Trade,Organization Behavior,Global Marketing

    Education:
    2002.9-2005.7 International Trade, Shanghai University

    Work Experience:
    Summer of 2004 Work in Shanghai Shengyi Company

    Skills:
    Past CET-4
    Be good at typing
    Generally skilled in operation of MS Windows & Office


    Jimmy Chen

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • English Teacher
      • Native Language:
      • British English
      • Home Country:
      • UK
      • Current Location:
      • Japan
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    I'm - never use contractions in formal writing.

    open-minded boy of 21 years old stuedying

    Boy????? Delete this immediately.
    stuedying - a spell check would eliminate this kind of mistake. You mustn't make spelling mistakes in a letter of such importance.

    I wouldn'tinclude my age in the letter.

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