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    Question plz edit this formal letter.thanks

    Dear Madam

    I am writing with regard to your advertisement on hiring employees for your company in the last issue of NEWS.If you dont mind please answer some qestions which i 'd like to know.


    Would it be possible to send me a copy of list of main jobs ?I'd like to get information of the location in city,situation of company and staff's status .
    I'd like to be informed the work's hours as a student stuies in university Would it be possible to change them and adjust to hours which are off ?


    I'd like to be familiar with the company and work there,So that I do need to have some assistance .I am looking forward to hear from you.

    Yours faithfully
    Mina Mahdi


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    Re: plz edit this formal letter.thanks

    Quote Originally Posted by taghavi View Post
    Dear Madam

    I am writing with regard to your advertisement on hiring employees for jobs in your company in the last issue of NEWS.If you dont mind please answer some qestions which i 'd like to know. If it is no bother, could you answer some questions about this?

    Would it be possible to send me a copy of list of main jobs ?I'd like to get information of the location in city,situation of company and staff's status .
    I'd like to be informed the work's hours as a student stuies in university Would it be possible to change them and adjust to hours which are off ?
    I would be grateful for a list of the main jobs offered, with information about the location of the jobs, and the nature of the company. I would also like to know about the hours as I am a student and can only at present work when I am not studying. Is it possible to adjust the hours?

    I'd like to be familiar with the company and to work there. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

    Yours faithfully
    Mina Mahdi
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