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    Jessica-young Guest

    Jessica's cover letter and resume

    Dear Sir or Madam:
    I am writing to you about the possibility of working as a assistant be on probation for KFC. It is the reputation and growth of your company attracts my great interests.

    I am a ungraduate student in Shanghai University. During the study, I have a part-time job in KFC as a waitress. I haved worked for KFC for about one year and now I hope to find a satisfactory job. Recently, I get a message that your company will recruit assistant be on probation. I believe my power and experience will help me to be successful as a assistant be on probation for KFC.

    Please call me your convenience to set up an interview time . My telephone number is 13917512*** and my email address is:EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead Thank you!



    Your faithfully,
    Jessica



    Enclosed are my resume.

    Name: Jiaye Yang
    English Name: Jessica
    Sex: Female
    Date of birth: Jan.22, 1984, in Shanghai
    Campus Address: ShangHai University 7-104
    Zio Code: 201800
    Email address: EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead
    Telephone number: 13917512***
    Health : Excellent
    Status: Undergraduate

    EDUCATION:
    2002-present The Shanghai University
    1999-2002 The Chu Neng Senior High School
    1996-1999 The Sixty-second Middle School

    English Skills
    Have a good command of both spoken and written English .Past CET-4

    Computer Abilities
    Skilled in use of MS FrontPage, Win 98, JavaScript, HTML, Office 2000,

    WORK EXPERIENCE:
    December 2003 – present, I am a waitress for KFC. My work is to serve for customs.
    July 2004 – August 2004 I had a social practice as a accountant in a company.
    September 2004-present, I have a job in the school. That is a reception in the computer room. I am in charge of managing the student.

    INTRESTEDFIELD
    I want to be a assistant be on probation for KFC. Because this can train the social intercourse skill and know how to communicate with customer. Get this job, I will also know the work experience of international chains. I have a one-year experience for serving customers and I know what the customer need. So I hope I have an opportunity to do such work.

    I shall be much obliged if your company will accord me an opportunity for an interview.
    Thank you!

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    t is the reputation and growth of your company attracts my great interests.

    This sentence is not grammatically correct- you should say
    t is the reputation and growth of your company WHICH attracts my great interest.

    However, even than, I'm not sure that the sentence works- it sounds a bit to much like flattery.

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