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    Emilys resume, welcome to give me advice

    Emily Yang
    Room 104 Building 7
    Shanghai University, Shanghai 201804
    (021)69981020 Email: EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead
    Dear Sir/Madam,
    Your advertisement for a Marketing sales interested me because the position that you described sounds exactly like the kind of job I am seeking.
    According to the advertisement, I have read your position requires. I feel that I am competent to meet the requirements. I will be graduating from Graduate School of Shanghai University this year with a M.S. degree. My studies have included courses in international trade and management and marketing.
    During my education, I have grasped the principals of my major and skills of practice. Not only have I passed CET-6, but also more important I can communicate with others freely in English. My ability to write and speak English is out of question.
    I would appreciate your time in reviewing my enclosed resume and if there is any additional information you require, please contact me. I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.
    Here is my resume

    Emily Yang

    Objective
    To obtain a challenging position as a marketing sales.
    Education
    1999.9-2002.6 Graduate School of Linling High School
    2002.9-2005.6 Graduate School of Shanghai University

    Academic Main Courses
    Mathematics
    Basic Marketing Macroeconomics International Economic
    Global Marketing Microeconomics English Skills
    Human Resources International Financial System
    Electronics and Computer
    International Trade
    Computer Abilities

    Skilled in use of MS FrontPage, HTML, Winwodes 98, Office 2000.
    English Skills
    Have a good command of both spoken and written English. Past CET-6.
    Language Skills
    Have a command of both spoken and written French.
    Qualifications
    ·General business knowledge relating to financial, healthcare
    ·Have a passion for the Internet, and an abundance of common sense
    Experience
    Sales in Guanyun Company for two month.
    Address
    Room 104 Building 7 No.20 Chengzhong Road Shanghai University 201804
    (021)69981020 EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead
      Action verbs give job descriptions punch.
      Continuing education indicates candidate's ongoing commitment to his/her career.
    :P

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    exactly like the kind of job I am seeking

    This is a bit messy- wouldn't it be better if you said 'exactly\just the job'?

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