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    Post Kindly correct the letter

    Sub: Request for Personal loan

    This has reference to the above subject

    Our staff members, Mr.X and Mr. Y have requested a personal loan in the amount of $000.00 each for their vacation expenditure.

    They are willing to pay it back, within six months, from their monthly salary

    I would request you to look into this matter and kindly approve the loan as requested


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    Re: Kindly correct the letter

    NOT A TEACHER!

    It is very important to notice that different countries may have different formats for formal letters. For example, in the United States of America, in the subject line we would write:

    "RE: Request for Personal Loan

    In reference to the above subject, our staff members, Mr.X and Mr. Y, have requested a personal loan in the amount of $000.00, each, for their vacation expenditure.

    They are willing to repay it within six months from their monthly salary.

    I would request you to look into this matter and kindly approve the loan as requested."

    What Da


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    Re: Kindly correct the letter

    In this context, the collocation is "With reference". However, if you have a subject line, there really is no need to refer to it in the body of this kind of letter.

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