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    jctgf is offline Key Member
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    is this text ok (1)?

    We are only five countries away from a complete prohibition of the death penalty for the young, said Clarisa Bencomo from HRV. ''Those few countries should abandon this barbarian practice so that nobody else is executed because of a crime committed when they were a child''.


    hi,
    is this fine, please?
    thanks.

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    Anglika is offline No Longer With Us
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    Re: is this text ok (1)?

    Quote Originally Posted by jctgf View Post
    We are only five countries away from a complete prohibition of the death penalty for the young, said Clarisa Bencomo from HRV. ''Those few countries should abandon this barbarian practice so that nobody else is executed because of a crime committed when they were a child."


    hi,
    is this fine, please?
    thanks.
    It's fine.

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