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    my cover letter and resume

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    DATE: OCT 19th 2004

    PERSON/COMPANY TELEPHONE: 13391203899
    OR 021-56964127



    RE: POSSIBLE EMPLOYMENT



    Dear the manager of Bowne Global Solutions (china):
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    > RESUME
    > >
    > > PERSONALDATA
    > > My first name is FIONA.
    > > Address: Sydney instution of language and commance Shanghai University
    > > Birthday:June 29th 1984
    > > Sex: female
    > > Height:164cm
    > > Weight: 102g
    >
    > > EDUCATION
    > > Im the undergraduate of Shanghai University, and my major is international trade. During 2003, I passed CET4 above 70, furthermore. I got the permission of ERP about financial management professional.In the meanwhile, I have finished the course of ERP about supply chain management professional.I am preparing IELTS nowadays in order to exam my capacity in English.
    > >
    > > WORK EXPERIENCE
    > > From June to July in 2004, I got practical training in Shanghai qiangsheng group. In that period of time, I did the good job in taxi and communication management, and I got the good performance evalution from the leaders in the corporation.
    > >
    > > INTRESTEDFIELD
    > > I prefer some challenge in work. In other words, I do the fundamentals to soar my capability to react to emengency.
    > >
    > > I appreciate to your company if I would have the time to be your interviewee.

    Fiona
    OCT 19th 2004

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Dear the manager of Bowne Global Solutions (china):



    This start would see the letter get thrown away in all probaility. Use a name, not a title and please check for very elementary errors like china- surely it would China.

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