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    can you correct,please?!?!?

    i have to write down some lines about my ideal partner!!
    i haven't got so many ideas,so if you have to add something or to give me ideas,i'm very great to you!!!thanks in advance!!

    My ideal partner is a frendly and sociable person that should be honest and sincere!!It doesn't matter if he hasn't the same interests as me,but the important thing is that he respect them.
    I don't bother about the apparence,but I prefer him tall and thin.
    He should be patient and openminded!

    see you soon......besos!!!


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    Re: can you correct,please?!?!?

    sorry i know that i have to wait,bou i pray you to answer soon.....

    thankss.


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    Re: can you correct,please?!?!?

    Quote Originally Posted by gx90t View Post
    I have to write down some lines about my ideal partner!!
    I haven't got so many ideas, so if you have to add something or to give me ideas,I will be very grateful to you!!! Thanks in advance!!

    My ideal partner is a frendly and sociable person that who should be honest and sincere!! [Why the exclamation marks?] It doesn't matter if he hasn't the same interests as me,but [one space following punctuation] the important thing is that he respect them. I don't bother about the his apparence,but I would prefer him tall and thin. He should also be patient and openminded!

    see you soon......besos!!!
    How many words are you supposed to have written?

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