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    Zoe2008 is offline Key Member
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    Further to our conversation, we note the goods can be released by your verbal confirmation. Please find the photos for the AC cord for your requested. There are two photos which are shown one for the old one, and the other one is new. We will inform to the factory to prepare it for your sign and approval in the next time you visit / arrive to the factory.

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    Anglika is offline No Longer With Us
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    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Further to our conversation, we note the goods can be released by on [the basis of]your verbal confirmation. Please find the photos for the AC cord for your requested as you requested. There are two photos one of which are shown one for shows the old one, and the other one is new the new one. We will inform to inform the factory to prepare it for your signature and approval approval and signature on the next time you visit the factory.
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