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    writing an itinerary

    When you write your tour guide book, can I say as follows?

    1. Here is a nice tour in which you will be able to have a great trip.

    2.YOu will start your trip by visiting XX and XX. Then you will end your trip at Broadway.

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    re: writing an itinerary

    Quote Originally Posted by bosun View Post
    1. Here is a nice tour in which you will be able to have a great trip.
    It is a nice tour which will be pleasant.
    Quote Originally Posted by bosun View Post
    2.YOu will start your trip by visiting XX and XX. Then you will end your trip at Broadway.

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