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    If you see any problems in the following sentence, can I have your comments?

    1. If parents always make important decisions for their children, it will prevent their children's growth. They will never be able to competent decision makers.

    2. Sometimes parents should let their children make foolish decisions. Children will learn from their poor decision and will never repeat the same mistakes.

    3. People learn from their experience, so we also have to give our children a chance to learn from their experience.

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    Default Re: make a decision

    Quote Originally Posted by bosun View Post
    If you see any problems in the following sentence, can I have your comments?

    1. If parents always make important decisions for their children, it will prevent their children's growth. They will never become competent decision makers.
    The others are alright.

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    Default Re: make a decision

    Quote Originally Posted by bosun View Post
    If you see any problems in the following sentences, can I have your comments?

    1. If parents always make important decisions for their children, it will prevent their children's growth. They will never (be able to) become competent decision makers.

    2. Sometimes parents should let their children make foolish decisions. Children will learn from their poor decisions and will never repeat the same mistakes.

    3. People learn from their experiences, so we also have to give our children a chance to learn from their experiences.
    Hi, bosun! Since you have many plural words in your sentences, I would continue using plurals. See suggestions in blue!

    Cheers,
    Amigo

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