and there was a sun shining outside my window >>"...and the sun was shining outside"I'm not going to lie to you, it's my homework. I ask you to go through that and check the spelling. It's pretty important to me and I'd be gratefulif you help me.
It was Friday the 15th. I got up early and there was a sun [how many suns are there?]shining outside my window. I cut school. I thought the best thing to do is to go to the river with my friends. When I was going outside I saw a black cat crossing my path. I've already known I knew then that this day isn't going to be one of the bestsbest in my life. Later it turned out that my worst fears were realized. I bought a bus ticket. When I got to the bus stop and I understood that I'm late, it really put me out of humour. Me and my friend My friend and I decided to go on foot. It was a really hot day. After we had arrived at the river, I saw I found/I discovered/I realized that I forgot had forgotten my swimming trunks. Even though there's heatit was hot, the water was cold and it's impossible to swim there without trunks so I decided to sit in the shade. I didn't feel to play like playing/that I wanted to play football or volleyball. There's a place where we can rent a canoe or kayak near the river. I heard that there's cheap.and I had heard that it was cheap. And it really is! It's only $4 per hour. I didn't think long and five minutes later I decided to boat down the river. But unfortunately bad luck was chasing me. After I had boated about 100 feet, the sun set, and it starded started raining. I knew I had to go back but boating upstream was really tafthard/tough. I reached the land and I was walking walked alongshore along the bank, towing my canoe. I had had (?) enough of it! In a minute I was failing (loosing power, is 'failing' correct?getting tired/could not go on). The rain was even bigger heavier than a few moments later earlier/before. When I reached the harbour I was tired out and drenched to the skin. In a hurry I gave back a the canoe. There's no-one near the river, even my friend hid somewhere. I didn't care about it omit . I started to comming back to to go back home. I wasn't cold no any longer. When I came to got/arrived home, my mom greeted me. She was happy I finally got home that I was home at last. And I was happy beacause because it was all over. It was definitelly definitely the worst day in my life.
If you see that there's something wrong, please tell me about it. I went through that twice but I'm still not sure if it has grammatical sense.
You could really do with using a spell-checker.
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