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    cover letter and resume ICE

    Box 2-601
    lingshan 708 road
    Shanghai,China 200134

    October15,2004

    Box1-18 human resource department
    Hubin 222 road
    Shanghai, China 200021

    Dear sir :
    Are you currently seeking a salesman to join your organization? If so, I would like to apply for the position. Bacause the position that you described sounds exactly like the kind of job I am good at.

    According to the advertisement ,your position requires top university, and having the passion in working . I feel that I am competent to meet the requirements. I will be graduating from Shanghai University next year . My major is the international trade. I understand the level of professionalism and communication required for long-term success in the field. My education background will provide your need.

    During my education, I have passed CET-4, I can communicate with others freely in English and have the skilled knowledge at operating the computer.

    Finally, thank you for your attention to this matter. Please call me at 13916620657 to arrange a convenient time when we may meet to further discuss my background in relation to your needs. I look forward to meeting you then.


    With many thanks
    Ice lu




    RESUME
    Room 601Building02
    Lingshan708 rode
    Shanghai 200134
    (021) 68552783
    Email:EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead
    Ice lu (lujun)

    Objective
    To obtain a challenging position as a salesman with communicate skill in English

    Education
    2002.9-2005.9 Dept.of international trade,Shanghai University
    Academic Main Courses
    bussiness
    microeconomic Business law Organization behavior
    macroeconomic International finanical Basic / global marketing
    International law International trade
    english
    Basic college english (1-3) Business speaking english IELTS
    Business writing english Business reading english

    Computer And English Abilitees
    communicate with others freely in English. write and speak English is out of question. Skilled use of office XP , accurate typing at 60 WPM

    Qualifications·
    Full of passion to work ·
    Know of the busines very well

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Are you currently seeking a salesman to join your organization?

    Don't you know? This style sounds too much like speech to me. I wouldn't start a letter with a direct question. State your purpose. Remember that you cannot hear the answer to the question, so my advice would be not to ask it.

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