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    correct sentence

    The theatrical agent was so impressed by the talent of the young singer that he devoted himself to managing her career exclusively.

    The theatrical agent, impressed by the talent of the young singer, devoting himself
    or
    devoted himself
    or
    he devoted himself

    which one is the best and give the same meaning of the first one
    thanks

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    Exclamation Re: correct sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by janjoun View Post
    The theatrical agent was so impressed by the talent of the young singer that he devoted himself to managing her career exclusively.

    The theatrical agent, impressed by the talent of the young singer, devoting himself
    or
    devoted himself
    or
    he devoted himself

    which one is the best and give the same meaning of the first one
    thanks

    The correct is: The theatrical agent, impressed by the talent of the young singer,devoted himself.....

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