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    Is the following sentence correct?

    In spite of your criticize that the owner's neglect of the customers and the small size of the restaurant, the owner visited each table and talked with cusomers.

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    Quote Originally Posted by bosun View Post
    Is the following sentence correct?

    In spite of your criticize that the owner's neglect of the customers and the small size of the restaurant, the owner visited each table and talked with cusomers.
    In spite of your criticisms of the owner's neglect of the customers and the small size of the restaurant, he/she visited each table and talked with cusomers.

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    Quote Originally Posted by bhaisahab View Post
    In spite of your criticisms of the owner's neglect of the customers and the small size of the restaurant, he/she visited each table and talked with cusomers.
    Is this fine?

    .... neglect of the customers ...

    sounds odd to me.

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    Default Re: criticize

    Yes it's fine, 'neglect of', love of', 'care of' etc.

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