Thanks for all the comments on my last Essays.
So here is the next one. Its based on a passage and a lecture about strategies to raise a child.
I´m not very satisfied because the topic seems to be not appropiate for me
"How should people raise their children to gain while maintaining discipline? In the passage three different strategies were presented and the professor expresses his opinion about them.
According to the professor, people should not use their power to influence a child's behaviour. As said described in the passage, these omit authority-related strategies are physical punishment and withholding affection. The professor refuses rejects these strategies, since children can feel unworthy of love and may therefore become aggressive persons.
As the professor puts it, contrary to most parent’s manners parents' methods, children should be supported for good behaviour instead of being punished for bad events. As explained in the passage, these reinforcements were based on age appropriate rules.
The professor supports his opinion by citing some experts which who state that only consequent rulesthe rules that are of consequence, which were based on logical explanations, lead to an appropriate socialization of the child. In the professor's view, reinforcement of good behavior should be the common strategy when raising a child."