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    Default Poem on the elephant man

    Your beauty was unfamiliar
    You looked like nobody on this earth
    You were different, unique
    Because of your appearance and your personality
    A strong personality
    Built, hardened as the trials went by
    Because you fought again rejection and pain
    Pain caused by people perception towards you
    I hoped that your appearance could become an advantage
    That your beauty was going to be found
    That you were going to be a man
    And, at last, that you lived you life
    In fact, they didn’t see you
    They analysed your appearance
    Without looking deep in your soul
    Where hidden your beauty was real

    Please, could you correct this poem... quickly because it is for friday afternoon

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    Default Re: Poem on the elephant man

    Quote Originally Posted by EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead View Post
    Your beauty was unfamiliar,
    You looked like nobody on this earth
    You were different, unique
    Because of your appearance and your personality.
    A strong personality,
    Built, hardened as the trials went by
    Because you fought again rejection and pain,
    Pain caused by people perception towards you
    Pain caused by people's perception of you.

    I hoped that your appearance could become an advantage,
    That your beauty was going to be found,
    That you were going to be a man.
    And, at last, that you lived your life.
    In fact, they didn’t see you.
    They analysed your appearance
    Without looking deep in your soul
    Where hidden your beauty was real.

    Please, could you correct this poem... quickly because it is for friday afternoon
    Well done!

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