Results 1 to 2 of 2

Thread: Review

  1. #1
    Paula Remedio is offline Newbie
    Join Date
    Oct 2008
    Posts
    1
    Post Thanks / Like

    Question Review

    Dear teacher,

    Could you please review my text below ? (i think there are some mistakes ):
    "I kindly ask your help to do it yourself on my behalf"

  2. #2
    Raymott's Avatar
    Raymott is offline VIP Member
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • Academic
      • Native Language:
      • English
      • Home Country:
      • Australia
      • Current Location:
      • Australia
    Join Date
    Jun 2008
    Posts
    19,888
    Post Thanks / Like

    Re: Review

    Quote Originally Posted by Paula Remedio View Post
    Dear teacher,

    Could you please review my text below ? (i think there are some mistakes ):
    "I kindly ask your help to do it yourself on my behalf"
    "Could I please ask you to do it on my behalf." (I'll owe you a beer) ... or whatever is appropriate.
    You'd probably need a reason.
    "Since I will be out of town that day, could I please ask you to do it on my behalf?"

Similar Threads

  1. Buying a used car - text for review
    By musicgold in forum Editing & Writing Topics
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 16-Sep-2008, 00:39
  2. Review or Reviewed
    By MsNyree in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 05-Apr-2008, 19:04
  3. need some one review my this writing
    By canbefun in forum Editing & Writing Topics
    Replies: 5
    Last Post: 18-Jan-2008, 01:49
  4. to look back on/to or vs. review
    By Englishlanguage in forum English Idioms and Sayings
    Replies: 10
    Last Post: 26-Jun-2007, 22:04
  5. preview and review
    By bosun in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 15-Apr-2007, 15:57

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •