I'm preparing my self for the TOEFL Test, and these days I'm working on the writing section.
could you please read my writing and correct my mistakes
your advices will help me a lot.
People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Everyone has some ambitions to achieve. But we can never reach our ambitions unless we work hard and spend effort on it.
In my opinion the reasons of attending college or university are exactly the ambition that every one is looking for. However, being ambitious is a good thing.
Some people looks for a good position in their future career, for example you can't be a doctor if you don't enter the medicine faculty, and if you're aiming to be an engineer you have to study at one of the engineering faculties.
At the same time we find some people who attend university because they want to earn more money in the future, because they are sure that an educated person have a chance to be rich more than uneducated one.
We can find also some people their first priority is increasing their knowledge and having new experiences in general or in their jobs, and I can say that this group of people will be more successful than the other groups without saying that the others has ill will of attending university or college.