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    gx90t is offline Junior Member
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    Default can u correct plssss....as soon as possibleee!!!

    This is a summary of a well-known story:"the Emperor's new cloth".
    Can you help me in improving the text by changing words or sentences in order to sounds more english and less italian,plzzzz!!!!


    One day 2 cheats arrived in town where there was an Emperor very fond on cloths. They told him they could weave beatiful cloth. They add that only people who are clever and fit for their office could see them.
    The Emperor was very interesting in this special cloth. While they was still weaving, the Emperor send a Minister for seeing them. But the Minister couldn't see nothing, so he was afraid of seeming stupid. He decided to tell they were magnificent.
    Another Minister was sent to the cheats by the Emperor to see how much the work was going on. But he couldn't see nothing too but hye praised the cloth too for fear of seeming stupid.
    Finally when the cloth was ready, the cheats called the Emperor and he was proposed to put on the new cloth in the public procession.
    The Emperor wore the cloth but nobody was able to tell him he was undressed. The Emperor realised he had been cheated as soon as a little child,the only one that speak with sincerity, said he had nothing on.


    many thanks in advanceeee!!!!!=)=)

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    Anglika is offline No Longer With Us
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    Default Re: can u correct plssss....as soon as possibleee!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by gx90t View Post
    This is a summary of a well-known story:"the Emperor's new cloth clothes".
    Can you help me in improving the text by changing words or sentences in order to sound more English and less Italian, please!


    One day 2 cheats two weavers arrived in town a city where there was an Emperor very fond on cloths clothes. They told him they could weave beautiful cloth such as was never seen before. They added that only people who are clever and fit for their office art could see them it [the cloth].
    The Emperor was very interesting interested in this special cloth. While they was were still weaving, the Emperor send a Minister for seeing to watch them. But the Minister couldn't see nothing anything, so he was afraid of seeming stupid. He decided to tell they were the Emperor that it was magnificent.
    Another Minister was sent to the cheats weavers by the Emperor to see how the work was going getting on. But he couldn't see nothing too but hye anything either. Nevertheless, he praised the cloth too for fear of seeming stupid.
    Finally when the cloth was ready, the cheats weavers called the Emperor and he was proposed to put on the new cloth in the public procession. ordered this wonderful cloth to be made into clothes that he would wear when he next made a public appearance.
    The Emperor wore the cloth "clothes", but nobody was able to dared tell him he was undressed not wearing any clothes. The Emperor realised he had been cheated as soon as a little child when a boy,the only one that speak with sincerity person to tell the truth, said he had nothing on. shouted out "The Emperor has no clothes!"


    many thanks in advance
    !=)=)
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