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    Letter requesting to transfer cash

    Please correct this letter

    Dear Sir

    SUB: Request to transfer cash

    I would like to transfer an amount of Rs.1000 from my account (Account No: xxxxxx) to X's account whose account no is yyy. She has an account in the Z branch of the same bank. I request you to take immediate action in this regard.

    Yours faithfully,
    Muktha Naive.

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    Re: Letter requesting to transfer cash

    Dear Sir: (add a colon)

    Re: Request to transfer funds (cash is literal; it will be an electronic transfer, no cash involved)

    I would like to transfer an amount of Rs.1000 from my account (Account No: xxxxxx) to the account of X, whose account no is yyy. She has an account in the Z branch of [name of bank].
    [paragraph break]
    Please transfer these funds immediately and confirm by return when complete.


    Yours truly,
    Muktha Naive.


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    Re: Letter requesting to transfer cash

    Point of style.

    British usage is a comma following salutation: Dear xxxx, and the ending would be Yours faithfully

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    Re: Letter requesting to transfer cash

    I'll grant you the comma, but personally, I like to keep faith out of discussions with banks.


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    Re: Letter requesting to transfer cash

    Quote Originally Posted by jlinger View Post
    I'll grant you the comma, but personally, I like to keep faith out of discussions with banks.
    I am faithful to my bank, so long as it keeps faith with me.

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