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    peter123 is offline Senior Member
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    Hi there,

    Could you proofread the following sentences?

    Health childhood is important for the development for children. War and diseasters may make childhood have a bad shadow.

    pete pva

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    Re: childhood

    Hi Peter

    As a Brit, but not a teacher, I would suggest the following:

    Health during childhood is important for children's development.
    War and diseasters may cast a bad shadow childhood development.

    Hope this helps

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