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    i just got home.it has been a very long day . i got up very early at dawn.at 10 am i

    had to take an exam.It was a little test and i spent the rest of the day at the

    library making some researches.

    at night i went go back home . i was a bit tired and turned the tv on and sat down.
    there was a journalist on tv who was talking about something horrible
    which made me concerned about.

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    Default Re: please correct my short essay

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    i just got home.it has been a very long day . i got up very early at dawn.at 10 am i

    had to take an exam.It was a little test and i spent the rest of the day at the

    library making some researches.

    at night i went go back home . i was a bit tired and turned the tv on and sat down.
    there was a journalist on tv who was talking about something horrible
    which made me concerned about.
    Firstly, you need to follow the capitalisation rules.
    Also there is no space before a period or comma, and there is one after.

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