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    raash02 is offline Newbie
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    Help me in my assignment

    hi can somebody help me correct these sentences? and point out the mistakes. Thanks





    I come from Poland.


    live in London for 3 years.

    You can find many diffrent ways to improve your skills.

    Iím currently work in restaurant, but I hope I change my job as soon as is possible.



    In my spare time I usually meet with my friends.

    We often go out.

    I have got two sisters.

    Both are younger than I.

    Before I went to England I was a student in Secondary School in Poland.

    I studied economy.

    I left in my country a lot of friends.

    I studied English in Poland for three years, but I wasnít good student.

    To be honest I know just a few English words, so when I arrived to London I was shy about my English.
    This time was really bad for me.

    However after one year I went to private college.

    I studied there a few months.

    After this school I had for one year private teacher.

    This teacher was really well, I developed my English so much.

    In last week Iíve been in Poland just for 3 day, and I was running in marathon.

    This event was really important for me, because I did my first marathon in my life.

    I didnít win the marathon.

    I was on 305 position in adults and 51 in 18 between 28 years old.



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    Anglika is offline No Longer With Us
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    Re: Help me in my assignment

    Quote Originally Posted by raash02 View Post




    live in London for 3 years. Personal pronoun and past tense for the verb.

    I’m currently work in restaurant, but I hope I change my job as soon as is possible. working in a restaurant... I hope to change...

    Both are younger than I. younger than I am//younger than me.

    I studied economy. Economics rather than economy

    I left in my country a lot of friends. I left a lot of friends in my country.

    I studied English in Poland for three years, but I wasn’t a good student.

    To be honest I know just a few English words, so when I arrived to London I was shy about my English. past tense; you arrive in a place

    After this school I had for one year private teacher. had a private teacher for one year

    This teacher was really well, I developed my English so much. good

    In last week I’ve been in Poland just for 3 day, and I was running in marathon. Last week I was in Poland for three days where I was running in a marathon.

    I was on 305 position in adults and 51 in 18 between 28 years old. I finished 305th in the adults, and 51st in the 18 to 28 year olds.
    All the other sentences were fine.

    Now put the sentences into paragraphs.

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