Type of CoP- the lists a few types but does not explain the purposes. I am no0t sure what the conastraints of words are, if any, but a few of your paragraphs are just topic sentences with little subsequent development. It's nmot my subject area, but I find the final quote of Wenger a bit unconvincing as an explanation; it doesn't actually map it into the larger social learning system or explain how this happens IMO.
CoP- I would use the words qwith the acronym in brackets the first time you use the term in the text. Also be consistent with your use iof articles with the word- What is Cop & Explain how a CoP fits. Check for singular and plural use - When or for what reason are CoP - it should be CoPs.
CoP teaches people how to develop themselves by provide high quality information to their goals.- All of them?