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    Please check these few sentences.

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    The historic pier may be swept away by the thoroughless government tomorrow, but nostalgia people can keep the pier alive in the form of reminiscence collection. In fact, "The Old Day in pier Contest" is open for entries which are related to the pier, such as a photo, a picture, a stamp or any creation in any form. And there are over $6000 worth of prizes up for grabs. The entry deadline is June 28, which will be strictly enforced.


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    Re: Please check these few sentences.

    Quote Originally Posted by redgiant View Post
    Thanks, teachers

    The historic pier may be swept away by the thoroughless government tomorrow, but nostalgia people can keep the pier alive in the form of reminiscence collection. In fact, "The Old Day in pier Contest" is open for entries which are related to the pier, such as a photo, a picture, a stamp or any creation in any form. And there are over $6000 worth of prizes up for grabs. The entry deadline is June 28, which will be strictly enforced.
    Through the lack of action by a thoughtless government, the historic pier may be swept away tomorrow. However, those with an interest can keep the memory of the pier alive through a collection of reminiscences and images. "The Old Days of the Pier Contest" is open for entriesrelating to the pier, such as photographs, pictures, stamps or any creation in any form. There are over $6000 worth of prizes up for grabs. The entry deadline is June 28, which will be strictly enforced.

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